Monday, May 14, 2007

Log

I have not heard the hollow sounds,
the hot tree rotting, the whole soft trunk,
however humid, heaving, what
has been exhausted here-to-fore--
the brown bark that's been well eaten,
and is bearing soil, birthing weeds.
It folows pure but inbred seed,
of blotched mushrooms--blooming about.
It cannot be in my conceit,
I've see it catharize and keep,
not seductive but concealed and sweet,
it capers to the maggots, but cats
who preen so kittily, don't seem
to peer inside the moldered trunk.

1 comment:

zachary said...

"I have not heard the hollow sounds,
the hot tree rotting, the whole soft trunk,
however humid, heaving, what
has been exhausted here-to-fore--
the brown bark that's been well eaten,"

this is super-rad.

i think that it starts to stumble when you enter into a rhyme scheme.

these five lines are more-than-words.

suggestion: use the rhyme scheme to initiate connections that you would normally not see. but don't stop there, expand on them. use the rhyme scheme as a way to initiate your work.

thanks for the first post, elias.

zach